Voice
Passion
Expertise
Good writing
Aesthetically pleasing
User-friendly
Originality/Interesting
Relevance
Unconventional English: 10. It's aesthetically pleasing and user-friendly because it's easy to analyze their posts.
Drunk Writer Talk (our blog): 10. Because we think have frequent posts and explain our posts. We're not being bias or anything.
Attack of the English Teacher: 8. They do a good job on their posts. They have a lot of information and explain their statements as well; However, the aesthetic aspect can be more creative.
Riding a Turtle: 9. It's simple and clean. The bloggers write very well.
Give Me a Minute: 8. The highlights on the blog bothers how we see it. Not relevant with they completely say.
First Blog Ever: 7. Very plain, but great job on the postings!
All about Unconventional English
Since we rate this blog a 10. It's obvious we like this blog, but to put our like of this blog in other words: Unconventional writing is a decent blog because it has passed most of the criteria, especially the aesthetic aspect and being user-friendly.
The visual component is great. It's simple. The color is great. It is organized. They have their post in a compiled manner that; that it shows a preview for every post. The titles shows the topic of the a certain post, which makes it user-friendly as well.
Their opinions on their blogs say so much about them. It conveys how their collaborate as an individual, as well as a team. They collaborate their opinions. In a way, they reflect the pros and cons of an idea.With that they seem to be not bias with their posts. As the picture states, they work together to produce a good blog.
https://www.asme.org/getmedia/703eeb2e-af83-4a04-a0dd-94e3592473e3/Teaching-Teamwork-to-Engineers_01.jpg.aspx?width=340
Not saying that they are a complete expert on their blog post; however, they're blog is relevant to the topics that they chose, and they have good-writing expressed on their blog posts.
Best Prospecti!
We chose the topic for texting and driving, because it is almost an epidemic in this country because many driers think that they multi-task. The thesis is: Texting and driving is very dangerous. It is distracting to the point the causes a big number of fatal accidents, which can lead to prison for the ones that are at fault.
As an example, the picture below shows how a texting and driving accident can occur. A driver cannot be paying attention to their driving and can hit an innocent bystander.
http://mariasachs.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/TextingWhileDrivingDanger.jpeg
by: Kristabel, LeeAnn, and Alyssa
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